北京丰台区高三一模英语试卷写作解析

第四部分：书面表达（共两节，35分）

第一节（15分）

      假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。今年寒假你参加了学校组织的赴美游学活动。请给接待你的史密斯夫妇写一封感谢信，内容包括：

1.     感谢对你的照顾；

2.     感谢带你体验西方文化；

3.     邀请他们来中国游玩。

注意：1. 词数不少于50；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Mr. and Mrs. Smith,

_____________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

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第二节（20分）

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和同学从网上得知美国抗癌男孩Dorian的愿望是看到有人在长城上举着“D-Strong”的牌子。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件，介绍你们帮助小男孩圆梦，并号召他人进行爱心接力的全过程。

注意：词数不少于60。

提示词：微信朋友圈   WeChat Moments

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第四部分：书面表达（共两节，35分）

第一节（15分）

一、评分原则：

1．本题总分为15分，按4个档次给分。2．评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言质量初步确定其档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。3．评分时应考虑：内容是否充实，交际是否得体，语言是否准确。4．拼写、标点符号或书写影响内容表达时，应视其影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。5．词数少于50，从总分中减去1分。

二、各档次的给分范围和要求：

三、One possibleversion:

Dear Mr. and Mrs. Smith,

How’s everything going? It’s been almost a week since I leftAmericaand Imiss you very much.

During the winter holiday, you took good care of me. Your love mademe feel at home. Besides, you showed me around New Yorkand the visit to Times Square was great, whichleft me a good memory and helped me learn more about American culture. Thankyou very much.

I hope you’ll come toChinaone day and I’ll take you to the places of interest in Beijing. I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

第二节（20分）

一、评分原则：

1．本题总分为20分，按5个档次给分。2．评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言质量初步确定其档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。3．评分时应考虑：内容要点的完整性、上下文的连贯、词汇和句式的多样性及语言的准确性。4．拼写、标点符号或书写影响内容表达时，应视其影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。5．词数少于60，从总分中减去1分。

二、内容要点：1． 得知消息，决定帮助2.   制作牌子3.   长城拍照4.   发送邮件，爱心接力

三、各档次的给分范围和要求：

四、One possibleversion:

A few days ago, when we surfed the Internet, we found that an American boy, Dorian, was suffering from cancer, and his last wish was to seesomeone holding his name and taking photos on the Great Wall. Then we decidedto help him realize his dream. Last weekend, we made a poster with “D-strong”written on it. The next day we came to the Great Wall. Holding the poster, wetook many photos. We hope that Dorian can understand our love and become optimistic. In the evening, we sent him the photos along with our regards. Wealso posted the story on WeChat Moments to call on more people join in the relay of love and support. I hope Dorian will live the rest of his life to the fullest.